～記述式英作文問題（高齢化社会の対処方法）～

今日は、記述式英作文問題（高齢化社会の対処方法）の解法と模範解答例を掲載します。

How to cope with the aging society

導入（Introduction）：高齢化社会への三つの対処法を提案したい。

本論（Body）

①少子化を止める。

②高齢者が働ける環境作りをする。

③年金制度の改革

結論（Conclusion）:社会保障制度の抜本的な見直しが必要となってくる。

＜解答例＞

Japanese society is aging faster than any other advanced country. This would be one of the most serious problems for future Japan. So, the government must take prompt effective measures against this problem. I have three suggestions for this problem.

Firstly, the government should stop the declining birthrate, because younger people are needed in order to support the elderly. Therefore, our society must support women who are willing to bear children and also we must create better social atmosphere for them. For example, we should improve services of day-care center.

Secondly, the government should encourage more retired people to go back to work. In order to do so, new jobs which are suitable for the elderly must be created. This would lead to their independence or meaningful life and also this would boost Japan’s economy and solve the problem with labor shortage.

Thirdly, the government should revise the existing national pension system. Now the increasing number of people don’t pay premium for it. In order to make it obligatory, it should be included in the consumption tax.

Consequently, revising the social welfare system including the national pension system, public nursing care system for the elderly, and medical insurance system may be the best solution for this problem. In my opinion, if higher taxes can improve our lives then it is acceptable.

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